Week 8: Feedback Pt II

The second draft was due this week. It was super helpful to get feedback, since my project centers on user experience, so I need to make sure people can go through the experience smoothly.

Highlights from my feedback:

  • start with “give or get soup” as landing page intro after
  • use darker pink
  • clickable things need to be more clear (use single color for links only)
  • copy in “give” section needs to be more clear
  • transition between “not what I wanted” and resource should allow more options

Things I want to work on:

  • edit copy to be more approachable/friendly and clear
  • work on “give” section (which has been a bit neglected so far)
  • work on resource and about pages

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